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英语作文李华对老师的意见和建议 【篇一：中考英语提建议类作文】 1. 询问学习外语的建议 假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友 linda 为了来中国参观而报名参加了 汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根 据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给 linda 写一封回信。 注意： 1．回信需要包括全部要点； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入 总词数； 3．字数 80 左右。 參考范文： dear linda ， im very glad that youll come to china . i know it isnt easy to learn a foreign language, but i have some ideas that may help. firstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. dont be afraid of making mistakes. then try to listen and read more in chinese. whats more, youd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day. above all, you should be confident in yourself and dont give up whenever you meet with difficulty. im sure you will succeed through your hard work. best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in china. yours, li hua 2. 对考试作弊现象的建议 目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及 个人建议。 原因： 1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏 上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴 看法与建议： 1、作弊有害； 2、要做人诚实，学习发奋； 3、学校应 减少考试。 要求： 1、字数 80-100 ；2、围绕要点可适当发挥； 3、文章开头已 给出，不计入总字数。參考范文： at present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations. there are three main reasons. first, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. second, some students are not hard-working and they dont work hard at their lessons. third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the internet. so they havent enough time to prepare for the exams. finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy. in my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. we students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves. 3. 对学习提出建议 假如你叫 zhang fang ，是美国中学生 lucy 的笔友，你收到了她的 电子邮件。在邮件中她表达了不喜欢英语和历史科目，因为要记的 东西太多又乏味，上课经常想睡觉，考试也考不好，期末考试就要 来了，不知道该怎么办。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出 一些建议，并表达对她的祝愿。 dear lucy ， i?m very happy to hear from you. don?t worry too much. many students have the same problem like you. i think it?s very common for students to dislike memorizing. here?s my advice. but in fact english and history are not as boring as you think. if you try the following things ， you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again. first you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons. it can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers? questions. it can help you understand better and memorize more quickly. what?s more ， you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. if you still feel unhappy ， you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help. i really hope my advice can help you out and get ?a? in english and history exams. keep trying ， i believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study. yours ， zhang fang 4.对生活提出建议 假如你是韩梅，你的笔友 alice给你发来的 e-mail ，邮件中告诉你， 最近妈妈总是对她说过马路要小心，要多穿衣服，在学校表现得好 不好，这些都让她很苦恼。给她写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮 她排忧解难。 提示词语： listen to ， mother?s love ， care about ， communicate with ， get along with ， smile dear alice ， as a teenager ， i met the same problem as you. but now i can get on/ along better with my mother. here are some ideas for you. your mother talks much ， because she cares about you. i?m sure your mum loves you very much. maybe it shows your mother?s love. so i think you should listen to her. if your opinions are different from your mother?s ， you can communicate with her ， and tell her what you?re thinking about. if your mother doesn?t take your advice ， just keep silent and give her a smile. i hope what i say here can help you a lot. han mei 5.对怎样缓解学习压力放松自己提出建议 中考即将来临，学生们学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课 后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此，不同的同学有不同的放松方 式，有的爱看电视，有的听音乐，有的做运动?请你谈谈你通过哪 些方式放松自己并说说原因，谈谈你的感受。 提示词语： relax ， tv ， music ， think the senior high school entrance examination is coming. in order to make a success in the exam i think it?s high time for us to relax a little. or we?ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.in order to relax ourselves ， we can turn to some of our hobbies ， different students have different ways --- some watch tv ， some listen to music ? but for me i enjoy taking exercise most. whenever i feel tired ， i always spend an hour （in ） walking or jogging in the park. besides ， i also play table tennis with my friends after class. in my opinion ， taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. i think it?s really helpful to both my health and my study. i hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed. i wish you all every success in the coming examination ！ 6.对不爱锻炼的同学提出建议 假如你叫李飞，是学校 “校园英语报”的编辑。你收到你同学张丽的 姐姐的来信。姐姐在信中说张丽在业余时间看电视看书，不喜欢锻 炼，希望你能写信给张丽告诉她锻炼的重要性并提一些建议。请根 据这位姐姐的要求，给张丽写一封回信。 dear zhang li ， your sister is worried about you very much. because you don?t take any exercise in spare time. i think health is very important to us teenagers. either study or work is based on strong body. doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. if we don?t take any exercise ， we may feel tired and get sick easily. so you should go out instead of staying at home. there are many kinds of sports you can do ， such as running ， swimming and ball games. just remember “exercise one hour a day ， keep illness away. ” good luck ！ yours ， li fei 【篇二：英语作文 建议信】 建议信（一） 假定你是李华, 你的朋友张柯发e-mail给你 , 就买什么样的英语词典 想听听你的建议。请根据下列提示 , 用英语给他回一封 120 个词左右 的 e-mail, 推荐他买电子词典。 1. 方便、快捷 ;2. 内置多部词典、能发音 ; 3. 能储存资料 ; 4. 其 他? ? 建议信（二） 假设你是李华,请根据以下要点写一封信 ,劝说全校同学过低碳生活 (live a low-carbon life) 。 1.陈述理由 :为什么要过低碳生活 ? (环境质量日益恶化等 )2. 如何过 低碳生活 ? 提出至少三条建议。 (必要时才开灯 ;让电器按节能方式运 转;骑自行车; 限制塑料袋使用 ; 垃圾分类等 ) 【篇三：英语老师最喜欢的八类英语作文句型】 阅卷老师最喜欢的八类英语作文句型 积累一些段落句型，摆脱平铺直叙，对英语写作可以起到事半功倍 的效果。关键是要有意识的把这些句型用到作文中去哦 ~，并且同学 们需要记住这条真理： practice makes perfect. （熟能生巧） 一.开头句型 1.as far as ...is/am/are concerned 就? ? 而言例如：就我而言 as far as i am concerned 2.it can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说...... 3.as the proverb says ，... 正如谚语所说的， ...... 4.it has to be noticed that... 必须注意到 ...... 5.its generally recognized that... 普遍认为...... 6.its likely that ...这可能是因为...... 7.its hardly that...这是很难的 ...... 8.theres no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问，无可否认...... 9.nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比 ...... 更重要。 10.whats far more important is that... 更重要的是 ? ... 二.衔接句型 1.a case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是 ...... 2.but the problem is not so simple. therefore ，... 然而问题并非 如此简单，所以 ? ? 3.but its a pity that... 但遗憾的是 ? ... 4.in spite of the fact that... 尽管 ...... 5.further, we hold the opinion that... 此外，我们坚持认为， ...... 6..however , the difficulty lies in... 然而，困难在于 ? ... ，我们要注意 ...... 8.as it has been mentioned above... 正如上面所提到的 ? 9.in this respect,... 从这个角度上 ,...... 10.however, 然而 , ... ? 三.结尾句型 1.i will conclude by saying... 最后我要说? ... 2.therefore, we have the reason to believe that... 因此，我们有 理由相信 ? ... 3.all things considered= in a word=in conclusion总而言之 4.it may be safely said that... 它可以有把握地说...... 5.therefore, in my opinion,... 因此，在我看来， ...... 6.from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that... 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论... ? 7.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that 通 ? 过数据我们得到的结论是， .... 8.it can be concluded from the discussion that... 从讨论中我们 可以得出 ...... 的结论 9.from my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来，如 果? ? 也许更好 四.举例句型 1.here is one more example.这里有不止一个例子 . 2.take ? for example. 就拿? ?为例子 五.常用于引言段的句型 1.some people think that ? 有些人认为? ... 2.to be frank, i can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。 3. i believe the statement is valid because 我?认为这个论点是 正确的，因为? ... 4. i cannot entirely agree with the idea that... 我无法完全同意 ? . 这一观点的说法 . 5. along with the development of ? , more and more... 随着? ? 的发展，越来越多的 ... ? 6.it is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that 通? 常认为? ... 7. as far as i am concerned, i completely agree with the former/ the latter. 就我而言，我完全同意前者 /后者的观点。 六 表示比较和对比的常用句型 1. a is completely different from b. a 和 b 完全不同。 2 the difference between a and b is/lies in... a 和 b 不同的地方 是...... 七 演绎法常用的句型 1. there are several reasons for ? , but in general, they come down to three major ones.对于...... 有几个原因，但一般，可以归 结为三个主要原因。 2. many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective. 有很多方法可以解决这个问 题，但下面的可能是最有效的。 3. generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. 一般来说， 这些优势可以列举如下。 4.the reasons are as follows. 理由如下。 八 因果推理法常用句型 1.because/since we read the book, we have learned a lot. 由于 阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。 2. we read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。 3. as a result of /because of/due to/owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。 满分作文词组奉送 1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy 2.人民生活水平的显著提高 /稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people ’s living standard 3.先进的科学技术advanced science and technology 4.面临新的机遇和挑战be faced with new opportunities and challenges 5.人们普遍认为it is commonly believed/ recognized that ? 6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development 7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention 8.不可否认it is undeniable that ? / there is no denying that ? 9.热烈的讨论/ 争论a heated discussion/ debate 10. 有争议性的问题a controversial issue 11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument 12.一些人 ? 而另外一些人 ? some people ? while others ? 13. 就我而言 / 就个人而言 as far as i am concerned, / personally, 14.就? 达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on ? 15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons 16.双方的论点 argument on both sides 17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in ? 18.对? 必不可少 be indispensable to ? 19.正如谚语所说as the proverb goes: 20. ? 也不例外 ? be no exception 21.对?产生有利 /不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on? 22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages 。 23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in 24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon 25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement 26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation 27. 开阔眼界 widen one ’s horizon/ broaden one ’s vision 28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills 29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden 30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration 31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective 32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts 33.对? 有益 be beneficial / conducive to ? 34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society 35.打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for ? 36.综合素质comprehensive quality 37.无可非议blameless / beyond reproach 39.致力于 / 投身于 be committed / devoted to ? 40.应当承认admittedly, 41.不可推卸的义务unshakable duty 42.满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of ? 43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information 44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources 45.因特网 the internet ( 一定要有冠词，字母 i 大写 ) 46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient 47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life 48.环保 (的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly 49.社会进步的体现a symbol of society progress 50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology 51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue 52.支持前 /后种观点的人 people / those in favor of the former/ latter opinion 53.有/ 提供如下理由 /证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence 54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way 55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice 56. ? 必然趋势an irresistible trend of ? 57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition 58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest 59.长远利益 . interest in the long run 60. ? 有其自身的优缺点 ? has its me rits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages 61.扬长避短 exploit to the full one ’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones 62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 take the essence and discard the dregs 。 63.对? 有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to 64.交流思想 / 情感 / 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information 65.跟上 ? 的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of ? 66.采取有效措施来 ? take effective measures to do sth 67. ? 的健康发展 the healthy development of ? 68.有利有弊 every coin has its two sides./no garden without weeds. 69.对?观点因人而异 views on ? vary from person to person. 70.重视attach great importance to ? 71.社会地位 social status 72.把时间和精力放在 ? 上 focus time and energy on ? 73.扩大知识面 expand one ’s scope of knowledge 74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally 75.有直接 /间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to ? 76. 提出折中提议set forth a compromise proposal 77. 可以取代 “think 的”词believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that 78.缓解压力 / 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden 79.优先考虑/发展 ? give (top) priority to sth. 80.与? 比较compared with ? / in comparison with 81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary. 82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of 83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water 84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities 85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress 86.毫无疑问undoubtedly, / there is no doubt that ? 87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding 88.充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of 89．承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure 90．保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society 91．更多地强调put more emphasis on ? 92．适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society 93．实现梦想 realize one ’s dream/ make one ’s dream come true 94. 主要理由列举如下 the main reasons are listed as follows: 95. 首先 first ， firstly ， in the first place, to begin with 96．其次 second, secondly, in the second place 97. 再次 besidesin addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore 98